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Rebuttal・Appealレターで使える例文集

今回は、論文の修正事項を説明するときに使える例文を紹介します。

前置き

• Thank you for providing these insights.
• Thank you for your suggestion.
• That is an interesting query.
• This is an interesting perspective.
• We agree with you.
• We agree with your assessment.
• You have raised an important question.
• You have asked an interesting question.

 編集者・査読者の意見への同意

• We agree with you and have incorporated this suggestion throughout our paper.
• We have reflected this comment by… (p. #, lines #-#).
• We have incorporated your comments by… (p. #, lines #-#).
• We agree that…
• We have now [X] (p. #, lines #-#) and [Y] (p. #, lines #-#). We think these changes now better [Z]. We hope that you agree.

編集者・査読者による提案事項への反論

• You have raised an important point; however, we believe that [X] would be outside the scope of our paper because…
• This is a valid assessment of…; however, we believe that [X] would be more appropriate because…
• We agree that…; however, due to [X], we believe that…
• In our revisions, we have attempted to [X] (p. #, lines #-#); however, we have retained some of our arguments because…
• We acknowledge that [X] has certain limitations; however,…

更に意味が明確になるように修正したことを表現

• We have clarified that… means… (p. #, lines #-#) throughout the paper.
• We have redrafted the [X] section (p. #, lines #-#) to establish a clearer focus.
• We have revised the text (p. #, lines #-#) to reflect…
• We removed [X] (from p. #, lines #-#) and hope that the deletion clarifies the points we attempted to make.
• We have replaced the term [X] throughout the paper with [Y] to use more precise terms.
• We have rewritten [X] (p. #, lines #-#) to be more in line with your comments. We hope that the edited section clarifies…
• We have elaborated on [X] (p. #, lines #-#) and expanded our consideration of [Y]. We hope these revisions provide a more [balanced][thorough] discussion.

論文に追加した内容とその説明

• We have included a new Figure # (p. #) to further illustrate…
• We have added a new Table # (p. #), which outlines…
• We have supplemented the [X] section with explanations of [Y] (p. #, lines #-#).
• There are multiple reasons/approaches to…, including [our scenario]. We have included an acknowledgment regarding this point in the [X] section (p. #, lines #-#).
• We have not done… However, we believe that [doing X] (p. #, lines #-#) would address this issue because…
• We have not done…; however, our sense is that…

繰り返しになる内容

• Please see point # above. [例: "Please see point 2 above."]

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